homework
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Which do you prefer, living in the city or in the country side?
Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I love trees and flowers. And I\'m
really interested in environment. So I try to protect nature. But I prefer
linving in the city instead of the contry side. There are several reasons.
First of all, the city is more convinient than the contry side in all of daily
life. We can easily buy thing and eat out and enjoy culture programs. And We
can have many opportunities to get a good job and good education services.
So I think living in the city is better for our family.
CORRECTIONS:
I love trees and flowers. And I\'m really
interested in environment. So, I try to protect nature. But, I prefer living in the city instead of the country side. There are several reasons. First of all, the city is more convenient than the country
side in all of daily life.
We can easily buy things and eat out and enjoy culture
programs. And, we can have many opportunities to get a
good job and good education services.
So, I think living in the city is better
for our family.
** Dear [이름], well done. ^^ You just have few corrections in your homework. Please take note of them.
Speak with you on tomorrow. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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