homework

2018-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

1. warning , hard 2. appeal 3. finish , last 4. i don'y konw 5. i don'y konw 1. The world have a garbage problem. 2. Garbage produce a CO2. CO2 is very harm to people,animal and all life in the earth. 3. They must be recycle. If they don't recycle earth cover the garbage. And reduse imprudence use.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong! How are you? Thanks for doing your homework.

Some of my students also said that trash or garbage is the most serious problem

and the only way to reduce it is to recycle. Sounds like you all cooperate one another.

See you later. ^^

~~May~~

1. warning , hard

>> RISKY/THREATENING
2. appeal

>> ATTRACTIVE
3. finish

>> CORRECT
4. i don\'y know

>> AFRAID
5. i don\'y know

>> QUIET/SILENT
1. The world have a garbage problem.

>> I think the most serious problem in the world is the garbage.
2. Garbage produce a CO2. CO2 is very harm to people,animal and all life in the earth.
>> Garbage produces CO2. CO2 is very harmful to all living things on Earth.
3. They must be recycle. If they don\'t recycle earth cover the garbage.
And reduse imprudence use.

>> They must be recycled. If recycling has not implemented, the world will be full of trash.

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