homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I hope you\'re having productive day. Thank you for doing your best in this homework. You got the correct idea in your sentences. I had a fun time reading them. I like your second sentence most of all because it somehow creates a story. Check below for some corrections I made to deliver the thought in your sentence more clearly.~~T. DEE
1.They posted that who will be promoted this month.
>>They posted a list of persons who will be promoted this month.
2. Here is the post. Give me the rope! I will connect them at here.
>>Here is the post. Give me the rope! I will wrap it around.
3. She uploads the posting about her life style.
>>The post she made was about her lifestyle.
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