homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
Are you ready for tonight's dinner? You'd better skip afternoon tea time to make space in your stomch KKK. Time is tikking! I hope you have a good time.
ESSAY: Examine the arguments in favor of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.
We call that 'lab animals' being used for test of cosmetics, foods, and medicines instead of human.
Rats are very similiar to human organism, for this reason, rats are the most common animals for test.
I can find many rats using meical test from TV and Newspapers.
I feel very sorry and shame as one people getting benefits from their sacrifice.
However,I have to admit that I agree with animal test rather than human test. even though I cannot measure who or what is more valuable as a being in this world.
At this point, I really want to ask to scientists or doctors why they cannot find other ways to test in this 21st century?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Happy Friday! It\'s the end of the weekdays again. It\'s time to take some time off and just enjoy the remaining days of autumn.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
Are you ready for tonight\'s dinner?
>>> Correct.
You\'d better skip afternoon tea time to make space in your stomach KKK.
>>> Correct.
Time is ticking! I hope you have a good time.
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Examine the arguments in favor of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.
We call that \'lab animals\' being used for test of cosmetics, foods, and medicines instead of human.
>>> We call them \'lab animals\' because they are being used as test subjects for cosmetics, foods, and medicines instead of humans.
Rats are very similar to human organism, for this reason, rats are the most common animals for test.
>>> Rats may have some similarities to humans because they are the most common test animals.
I can find many rats using medical test from TV and Newspapers.
>>> I have heard from the TV and newspapers many stories about using rats as test subjects.
I feel very sorry and shame as one people getting benefits from their sacrifice.
>>> I feel very sorry for them and it\'s a shame that people benefit from their sacrifices.
However, I have to admit that I agree with animal test rather than human test.
>>> However, I have to admit that I would easily agree to animal testing rather than human testing.
Even though I cannot measure who or what is more valuable as a being in this world.
>>> Honestly, I don\'t know who is more important, them or us.
At this point, I really want to ask to scientists or doctors why they cannot find other ways to test in this 21st century?
>>> At this point, I really want to ask the scientists or doctors why they cannot find other ways to test their products since this is already the 21st century?
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
Are you ready for tonight\'s dinner?
>>> Correct.
You\'d better skip afternoon tea time to make space in your stomach KKK.
>>> Correct.
Time is ticking! I hope you have a good time.
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Examine the arguments in favor of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.
We call that \'lab animals\' being used for test of cosmetics, foods, and medicines instead of human.
>>> We call them \'lab animals\' because they are being used as test subjects for cosmetics, foods, and medicines instead of humans.
Rats are very similar to human organism, for this reason, rats are the most common animals for test.
>>> Rats may have some similarities to humans because they are the most common test animals.
I can find many rats using medical test from TV and Newspapers.
>>> I have heard from the TV and newspapers many stories about using rats as test subjects.
I feel very sorry and shame as one people getting benefits from their sacrifice.
>>> I feel very sorry for them and it\'s a shame that people benefit from their sacrifices.
However, I have to admit that I agree with animal test rather than human test.
>>> However, I have to admit that I would easily agree to animal testing rather than human testing.
Even though I cannot measure who or what is more valuable as a being in this world.
>>> Honestly, I don\'t know who is more important, them or us.
At this point, I really want to ask to scientists or doctors why they cannot find other ways to test in this 21st century?
>>> At this point, I really want to ask the scientists or doctors why they cannot find other ways to test their products since this is already the 21st century?
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