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Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing an interesting piece of memory from your childhood.

I wish I had siblings too, but I\'m an only child, so I played with my cousins instead.

See you in class! ^^

~~t. Ally

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I have a sister who is 4 years older than me.

>> CORRECT!

When I was a primary school student, I used to join with her and her friends when they had a free time.

>> When I was a primary school student, I used to join her and her friends when they had some free time.

I could enjoy because it was all new for me.

>> I enjoyed it because it was all new to me.

They took me kind of music cafes and snack restaurants that usually high school students and adults can go.

>> They took me to some sort of music cafes and snack restaurants that high school students and adults usually go to.

I could have a such a interesting time because of an older sister and her friends.

>> I had such an interesting time because of my older sister and her friends.