homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. Do you agree?
Exercising is a good way to improve health, but I don't agree it.
The best way is eat a healthy food,and don't eat a little or don't eat a lot in daily.
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~Kelly
The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. Do you agree?
Exercising is a good way to improve health, but I don\'t agree it.
>> Exercising is a good way to improve health, but I don\'t agree with it.
The best way is eat a healthy food,and don\'t eat a little or don\'t eat a lot in daily.
>> The best way is eat a healthy food in moderation.
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