homework
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Can you describe the best Halloween costume you have seen? Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
Actually I have not enjoyed Halloween party. So, I didn\'t see any remarkable Halloween costume. My daughter\'s school has a Halloween party every year. That party was held last Friday. My daugter wanted to be a witch. She wore a black dress and cape and witch\'s cap. But, she was a little bit disappointed because I didn\'t prepare a witch\'s bloom. She looked like a cute witch. She really enjoyed the party at school.
CORRECTIONS:
Actually, I have not enjoyed Halloween party. So, I didn\'t see any remarkable Halloween costume. My daughter\'s school has a Halloween party every year. That party was held last Friday. My daughter wanted to be a witch. She wore a black dress and cape and witch\'s cap. But, she was a little bit disappointed because I didn\'t prepare a witch\'s broom. She looked like a cute witch. She really enjoyed the party at school.
** Dear [이름], well done. ^^ You just have few corrections in your homework. Please take note of them.
Speak with you on Monday. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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