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2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Q. Can you describe the best Halloween costume you have seen. Please answer in complete sentences. A. Actually I have not enjoyed Halloween party. So, I didn't see any remarkable Halloween costume. My daughter's school has a Halloween party every year. That party was held last Friday. My daugter wanted to be a witch. She wore a black dress and cape and witch's cap. But, she was a little bit disappointed because I didn't prepare a witch's bloom. She looked like a cute witch. She really enjoyed the party at school.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Can you describe the best Halloween costume you have seen? Please answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

Actually I have not enjoyed Halloween party. So, I didn\'t see any remarkable Halloween costume. My daughter\'s school has a Halloween party every year. That party was held last Friday. My daugter wanted to be a witch. She wore a black dress and cape and witch\'s cap. But, she was a little bit disappointed because I didn\'t prepare a witch\'s bloom. She looked like a cute witch. She really enjoyed the party at school. 

 

CORRECTIONS:

Actually, I have not enjoyed Halloween party. So, I didn\'t see any remarkable Halloween costume. My daughter\'s school has a Halloween party every year. That party was held last Friday. My daughter wanted to be a witch. She wore a black dress and cape and witch\'s cap. But, she was a little bit disappointed because I didn\'t prepare a witch\'s broom. She looked like a cute witch. She really enjoyed the party at school. 

 

 

** Dear [이름], well done. ^^ You just have few corrections in your homework. Please take note of them.

 

Speak with you on Monday. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

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