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2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Summarize the news article you read. Samsung electronic and Huawei lost the title 'the first fordable smartphone' to the third company. Royole, China company, released fordable smartphone 'FlexPai'. Last 31st, Royole which hold new product presentation in Beiging unveiled the product named as 'the first fordable smartphone in the world'. It can be folded and unfolded into back and forth, and when unfolded, screen size is 7.8 inch. This phone's price is $140. Officially it is for the fist time among companies releasing fordable smartphone. The reason that they can release this product is thank to flexible display techniques that have been accumulated as display manufacturer. The displays, which were developed and produced by Royole themselves as the name 'the second generation of Chani', were used in FlexPai. This name mean cicada as Chinese.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young! Thank you once again for this. This is awesome! I\'m really curious how it looks and how it folds.

- T. Beth

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Samsung electronic and Huawei lost the title \'the first fordable smartphone\' to the third company.

>>> CORRECT. (Samsung electronic and Huawei lost the title \'the first foldable smartphone\' to the third company. )

>>> OR: Samsung electronic and Huawei lost the title for \'the first foldable smartphone\' to the third company.   

Royole, China company, released fordable smartphone \'FlexPai\'.

>>>  Royole, a Chinese company, released a foldable smartphone called \'FlexPai\'. 

Last 31st, Royole which hold new product presentation in Beiging unveiled the product named as \'the first fordable smartphone in the world\'.

>>> Last October 31st, Royole unveiled the product named as \'the first foldable smartphone in the world\' during a new product presentation it held in Beijing.    

It can be folded and unfolded into back and forth, and when unfolded, screen size is 7.8 inch.

>>>  It can be folded and be unfolded with a screen size of 7.8 inches. 

This phone\'s price is $140.

>>>  CORRECT.

>>> OR: This phone costS $140.

Officially it is for the fist time among companies releasing fordable smartphone.

>>> It is officially the first time for a company to release a foldable smartphone.  

The reason that they can release this product is thank to flexible display techniques that have been accumulated as display manufacturer.

>>> Thanks to flexible display techniques that they have been accumulating as display manufacturers, they were able to release this product.   

The displays, which were developed and produced by Royole themselves as the name \'the second generation of Chani\', were used in FlexPai.

>>> CORRECT.  

This name mean cicada as Chinese.

>>> This name means cicada in Chinese.   


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