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2018-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I searched the origin of Halloween. It originated from defending bad spirits by using a scary mask. In Korea, we have a similar thing like mask. That is dzuki-bean gruel called Patjuk which has a yang energy. So, it drives out bad spirits has a ying energy. We eat patjuk at winter solstice ,Dongji.

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I searched the origin of Halloween.

It originated from defending bad spirits by using a scary mask.
In Korea, we have a similar thing like mask.

That is dzuki-bean gruel called Patjuk which has a yang energy.
So, it drives out bad spirits has a ying energy.

We eat patjuk at winter solstice ,Dongji.


I have searched  about the origin of Halloween.

I have discovered that it\'s purpose is to defend humans from bad spirits by using scary masks.
In Korea, we also protect ourselves from bad spirits similar to the purpose of wearing masks.

We have a dzuki-bean gruel called Patjuk which has a yang energy.
It drives out bad spirits which has a ying energy.

We eat patjuk during the winter solstice.

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