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2018-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I prefer traveling by plane rather than by car. When i traveled south Korea from north to south,i used the train as my transportation. At that time i took a train for more 4 hours. It was a really hard time. My back really hurt because we was sating for a long time. I decided to never ride a car or train for several hours again. So if i must transfer for many hours, i want to choose a plane. To choosing the plane , i will have to earn the much money.

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~~T. Dee


I prefer traveling by plane rather than by car.
When i traveled south Korea from north to south,i used the train as my transportation.
At that time i took a train for more 4 hours.

It was a really hard time.
My back really hurt because we was sating for a long time.

I decided to never ride a car or train for several hours again.
So if i must transfer for many hours, i want to choose a plane.

To choosing the plane , i will have to earn the much money.


I prefer traveling by plane rather than by car.
When I traveled from the north to the south of South Korea, I used the train.

During that trip I was on a train for more than 4 hours.

It was a really tough time.

My back hurt so bad because we sat for a long time.

From then on, I have decided to never ride a car or a train for a long trip again.
So if I must travel for long hours, I want to use a plane.

In choosing to ride a plane, I will have to earn money to be able to afford it.

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