homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I hope you\'re having a good day. Thank you for completing your homework. I always like reading your work. I can always sense the heart of your writing. It feels like I could always know a piece of your story in every homework you accomplish. And I love it! On this homework, you have inconsistency in capitalizing the pronoun \"I\", misused some prepositions and missed to use articles. I know that you are working on them. Continue with this progress!
~~T. Dee
I have been eager to be good at English since i was a teenager .
I want to fluently speak English regardless of my career.
I think that I\'m affected by my relative sister who lived and studied in Australia for several years.
But I couldn\'t develop my English skill as much as i want because I was lazy at study.
Anyway, If i have fluent speaking skills , I can get many options to choose a company and I can be more competitive.
I hope that I work in a global company and I want to live in another country once.
In order to achieve my dream , English is must.
I have been eager to better my English communication skills since I was a teenager .
I want to fluently speak in English regardless of my career.
I think that it\'s because I wish to be like my cousin who lived and studied in Australia for several years.
But still, I couldn\'t develop my skills in English as much as I want because I was lazy to study.
Anyway, if I have better speaking skills, I could have many options to choose a company to work with and I can be more competitive.
I hope that I could work in a global company and I want to live in another country at least once.
In order to achieve my dream, English is a must for me.
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