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2018-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Q. Have you ever done something unusual in life? A. I don't think that I have done anything unusual in life. Because I have a lot of shame and I don't like to go out in front of others. I feel shy when I do something unusual. But as I'm getting older, sometimes I want to do something unusual even if people look at me weird.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Have you ever done something unusual in life? Please answer in details. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I don\'t think that I have done anything unusual in life.
Because I have a lot of shame and I don\'t like to go out in front of others. I feel shy when I do something unusual.
But as I\'m getting older, sometimes I want to do something unusual even if people look at me weird.

 

CORRECTIONS:

I don\'t think that I have done anything unusual in life.
Because
, I have a lot of shame and I don\'t like to go in front of others. I feel shy when I do something unusual.
But
, as I\'m getting older, sometimes I want to do something unusual even if people look at me weird.

 

 

** Dear [이름], nice one! J Only the punctuations missing on your answer. Please take note of them. J Thank you. ^^

 

Speak with you soon. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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