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2018-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I ride a bus and go to company,in the morning. At this time ,the traffic is stuck in the long and big road. I realize a many people own and ride a car, but half of there are ride a bus the traffic don't stuck in the road maybe. Also many people don't use there car , CO2 is don't product like now. Then earth is health and global warming get better now.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Seong! Thanks for your effort in doing this homework. Keep safe when you go to work.

So it\'s better for you to go to work early since there\'s always traffic in the morning.

See you later. ^^

~~May~~

I ride a bus and go to company,in the morning.

>> In the morning, I ride a bus then go to work.
 At this time ,the traffic is stuck in the long and big road.
>> During rush hours, there\'s a traffic jam.
I realize a many people own and ride a car, but half of there are ride a bus

>> I realized that many people nowadays already have their own car, but there are still people out there who take the public transportation.
 the traffic don\'t stuck in the road maybe.
>> Traffic jams has minimized.
Also many people don\'t use there car , CO2 is don\'t product like now.
>> Also, some people don\'t use their car that\'s CO2 has decreased.
Then earth is health and global warming get better now.

>> The pollution in the world is getting better now.

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