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2018-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> What habit of others do you find bothersome? I'm so sensitive on acoustic noise that this sometimes give me a lot of stress. For example, eating noises made by friends sometimes drive me up the wall in the situation where I got stressed already by another things. If I would be depressed or get stressed already, I'm inclined to concentrate on surrounding noise. While taking with friends, if they would make eating noises, I can't concentrate on their speaking but only their eating noises. More hard thing for me is that these noises are heard for me more and more loudly. So, those conquer me so intensively that it make me not concentrate on conversation. So, rather than bearing it, I usually tell them that I have a tendency to get stressed by eating noise and ask them to reduce their noise. Eating noise is no manner, so people almost apologize that and reduce it.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. You must be really sensitive or stressed out to be bothered by loud chewing people make when eating. But you are right, in some culture, chewing loudly is a bit rude. But in some countries, they think it is okay.

- T.Beth

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I\'m so sensitive on acoustic noise that this sometimes give me a lot of stress.

>>>> I\'m so sensitive to acoustic noise that this sometimes gives me a lot of stress.      

For example, eating noises made by friends sometimes drive me up the wall in the situation where I got stressed already by another things.

>>>>  For example, eating noises made by friends sometimes drive me up the wall especially when I am already stressed because of another things.    

If I would be depressed or get stressed already, I\'m inclined to concentrate on surrounding noise.

>>>>  If I am depressed or already stressed, I\'m inclined to be sensitive to surrounding noise.     

While taking with friends, if they would make eating noises, I can\'t concentrate on their speaking but only their eating noises.

>>>> While talking with friends, if they would make eating noises, I can\'t concentrate on their speaking but only to their eating noises.    

More hard thing for me is that these noises are heard for me more and more loudly.

>>>> To make it worse, these noises tend to grow louder on me.      

So, those conquer me so intensively that it make me not concentrate on conversation.

>>>> So, these noise conquer me intensively that I can\'t seem to focus on the conversation.     

So, rather than bearing it, I usually tell them that I have a tendency to get stressed by eating noise and ask them to reduce their noise.

>>>>  CORRECT. 

>>>> Therefore, rather than bearing it, I usually tell them that I have a tendency to get stressed by eating noise and ask them to try to eat quietly.    

Eating noise is no manner, so people almost apologize that and reduce it.

>>>> Creating noise while eating is rude, so people mostly apologize for that and try to reduce it.     


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