homework

Hello [이름]!  Thank you for taking some time out of your busy schedule to express your opinion regarding this issue. ^_^
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
 Most of Monday, I am up to my neck in work. but I can make time for you. Cheer up for this week!
>>> I\'m usually up my neck with work on Mondays but I will make time for our class. Be happy this week!
 ESSAY: Schools should do more to teach students about their health and well-being. Do you agree or disagree?
 I don\'t know how many hours they teach students about health and well-being in school.
>>> Correct.
As you know, I am not a student now and had graduated long long time ago.
>>> As you know, I have already graduated a long long time ago.
 When I was a student, there was physical eduction class twice a week as I remember.
>>> When I was a student, I remember that we had the physical education class twice a week.
 I didn\'t like PE because I was a bad atheletic.
>>>  I didn\'t like PE then because I was a bad athlete.
 We had physical fitness tests such as 100 meter race, chin-ups, sit-ups,a standing long jump and a long distance race.
>>>  We had physical fitness tests in 100 meter race, chin-ups, sit-ups, a standing long jump and a long distance race.
 I ran 100 meters in over 20 seconds.
>>> Correct.
 I hang on iron bar in a wink.
>>>  I hang on the iron bars in a wink.
 I could not jump as long as my heights.
>>>  Although, I could not jump as high as my height.
 I walked in a long distance race holding vomit.
>>>  I walked the long distance race feeling nauseous. 
 I bet you, I must be worse now. 
>>>   I bet you, it has gotten worse now.