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2018-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think once in three weeks is proper. Theres no reason why I think once is three weeks is proper, it's just a feeling. It's better to not eat fast foid at all, but I don't want to do it. I like eating pizza. I ate it yesterday. It was very delicious.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I love fast food as well.

I agree that it\'s better to avoid it but what can we do?^^

You made simple and clear sentences here.

Keep up the good work!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think once in three weeks is proper.
>> Correct
Theres no reason why I think once is three weeks is proper, it\'s just a feeling.
>> There\'s no reason why I believe that but I can just feel it.
It\'s better to not eat fast foid at all, but I don\'t want to do it.
>> It\'s actually better not to eat fast food at all but I can\'t avoid it.
I like eating pizza.

>> Correct

I ate it yesterday.
>> I ate some yesterday.
It was very delicious.

>> Correct

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