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2018-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Q.Fill in the blank: If I could invent anything, I would invent ______________________ because_______________________. A. lf I can invent something, I want to make something special than it is in the world these days.Because works in this world do not even look at people and it is good for people to see a lot of curiosity by making something special. And (In fact, I didn't use the invention because it was private.) Also This is the first time I've done it.~~^^OKAY?ㅎㅎ

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Cat!

It was so nice to meet you.

You have such an awesome imagination.

Thank you for sending a composition. ^^

~~t. Ally

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lf I can invent something, I want to make something special than it is in the world these days.

>> If I could invent anything, I would want to make something more special than the others these days.

Because works in this world do not even look at people and it is good for people to see a lot of curiosity by making something special.

>> Because works in this world do not even consider people and it is good for people be curious about something quite special.

And (In fact, I didn\'t use the invention because it was private.)

>> CORRECT!

Also This is the first time I\'ve done it.~~^^OKAY?ㅎㅎ

>> This is also the first time I\'ve done it. Okay? ^^

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