homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are some ways you feel you can make a difference in this world?
It is very hard questuion to me. But i think to need , change of citizenship.
Because a law citizenship is cause an accident(murder , stealing and attack etc).
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong! Thanks for trying to answer this homework.
But I don\'t really understand what you are saying about citizenship. I\'m sorry.
Talk to you later.
~~May~~
It is very hard questuion to me.
>> It\'s very hard for me to answer this question.
But i think to need , change of citizenship.
>> I think there\'s a need to change identity.
Because a law citizenship is cause an accident(murder , stealing and attack etc).
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