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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. It is really unfortunate that there are requests from older people we cannot refuse because it is a good deed to just follow and obey them. Moreover, it\'s a good gesture.
- T. Beth
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Experiences mentioned in question are only in relation between older people and me, not friends or younger people than me.
>>>> Experiences mentioned in this question are only between older people and me, not friends or people younger than me.
Because I\'m operation assistant in my graduate school, I have to process computer problem when arising in our major department.
>>>> Because I\'m an operation assistant in my graduate school, I have to process computer problem that arise in our major department.
Although it is not my work to resolve individual PC problem of professors, however, they ask me to fix their computer due to the reason that I know more knowledge on computer than other assistant.
>>>> Although it is not my work to resolve individual PC problems of professors, they ask me to fix their computer due to the reason that I am more knowledgeable on computers than other assistants.
If there are a few professors in our major department, it would be not problems for me.
>>>> If there are only few professors in our major department, it would not be a problem for me.
But, in our department there are professors over 15.
>>>> But, in our department there are over 15 professors.
Although I can\'t accommodate these many people, I have processed their PC problem also because I can\'t refuse professor\'s requests.
>>>> Although I can\'t accommodate these many people, I have processed their PC problems also because I can\'t refuse the professor\'s requests.
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