homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
I really enjoyed talking with you today. I feel like I have a new good friend. I hope you take care of yourself like your husband. How about taking vitamin C everyday? Vitaminc is good to your skin sepically freckles. hihihi Have a wonderful day!
ESSAY: How does it feel to be the most desirable man/woman on earth? How do you define beauty?
We love beautiful things and try to possess the beauty since we were born. To persue beauty is a kind of human nature.
Some says, human fall in love in just 3 seconds. It means that our thoughs are conrolled by vision more than rationality.
We don't concern about what he/she thinks or how he/she has been when we meet someone at first. We judge them by their appearnce in fact.
The old saying, beauty is only skin deep is true.
but there is another saying 'ugly goes to clear to the bone'.
I define beauty
Beauty is the mirror showing the collaboration of inside and outside.
Oops! I miss the topic and write about other subject.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Thank you for your kind words and I do agree. I found a friend in you. I do take Vitamin C, once in a while, when I remember to buy some from the pharmacy. Ha ha ha. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene!
I really enjoyed talking with you today.
>>> Correct.
I feel like I have a new good friend.
>>> Correct.
I hope you take care of yourself like your husband.
>>> I hope you take care of yourself like your husband does.
How about taking vitamin C everyday?
>>> Correct.
Vitamin C is good to your skin, specifically freckles. hihihi
>>> Vitamin C is good to your skin, specifically on freckles. hihihi
Have a wonderful day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: How does it feel to be the most desirable man/woman on earth? How do you define beauty?
We love beautiful things and try to possess the beauty since we were born.
>>> We love beautiful things and try to possess a certain degree of beauty ever since we were born.
To persue beauty is a kind of human nature.
>>> Correct.
Some says, human fall in love in just 3 seconds.
>>> Some say, humans fall in love in just 3 seconds.
It means that our thoughs are conrolled by vision more than rationality.
>>> Correct.
We don\'t concern about what he/she thinks or how he/she has been when we meet someone at first.
>>> We are not concerned about what he/she thinks or how he/she has been when we meet someone the first time.
We judge them by their appearnce in fact.
>>> In fact, we judge them by their appearance.
The old saying, beauty is only skin deep is true.
>>> The old saying that goes this way, beauty is only skin deep, is true.
but there is another saying \'ugly goes to clear to the bone\'.
>>> But there is another saying, \'ugly goes deeply to the bones\'.
I define beauty
>>> I wanna define beauty.
Beauty is the mirror showing the collaboration of inside and outside.
>>> Beauty is a collaboration of what\'s inside and outside.
Oops! I miss the topic and write about other subject.
>>> Oops! I missed the topic and wrote about another subject.
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene!
I really enjoyed talking with you today.
>>> Correct.
I feel like I have a new good friend.
>>> Correct.
I hope you take care of yourself like your husband.
>>> I hope you take care of yourself like your husband does.
How about taking vitamin C everyday?
>>> Correct.
Vitamin C is good to your skin, specifically freckles. hihihi
>>> Vitamin C is good to your skin, specifically on freckles. hihihi
Have a wonderful day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: How does it feel to be the most desirable man/woman on earth? How do you define beauty?
We love beautiful things and try to possess the beauty since we were born.
>>> We love beautiful things and try to possess a certain degree of beauty ever since we were born.
To persue beauty is a kind of human nature.
>>> Correct.
Some says, human fall in love in just 3 seconds.
>>> Some say, humans fall in love in just 3 seconds.
It means that our thoughs are conrolled by vision more than rationality.
>>> Correct.
We don\'t concern about what he/she thinks or how he/she has been when we meet someone at first.
>>> We are not concerned about what he/she thinks or how he/she has been when we meet someone the first time.
We judge them by their appearnce in fact.
>>> In fact, we judge them by their appearance.
The old saying, beauty is only skin deep is true.
>>> The old saying that goes this way, beauty is only skin deep, is true.
but there is another saying \'ugly goes to clear to the bone\'.
>>> But there is another saying, \'ugly goes deeply to the bones\'.
I define beauty
>>> I wanna define beauty.
Beauty is the mirror showing the collaboration of inside and outside.
>>> Beauty is a collaboration of what\'s inside and outside.
Oops! I miss the topic and write about other subject.
>>> Oops! I missed the topic and wrote about another subject.
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