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Hello [이름]!
I\'ve done that too!
I could not think of a reason that would not hurt my boss so I told them that I was going to another place.
Thank you for sharing your story. ^^
Here are some corrections.
See you in class! :)
~~t. Ally
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When I want to change my job, I couldn\'t tell the truth.
>> When I want to change my job, I couldn\'t tell the truth.
I remember the first time when I talked about leaving a job to the company.
>> I remember the first time I talked about wanting to leave my job at the company.
I told them honestly, but that was the last time that I was honest. .
>> CORRECT!
After that I told sort of white lie.
>> After that I sort of just told some white lies.
I thought, It was better for them to tell the reason of leaving the job such as wanting to go back to study or health problem.
>> I thought it would be better for them to say that the reason I left the job is because I wanted to go back to studying or that I have a health problem.
Sometimes I am reluctant to tell all about something, because it can make them feel bad.
>> Sometimes I am reluctant to tell people about some matters because it makes them feel bad.
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