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2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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When I want to change my job, I couldn't tell the truth. I remember the first time when I talked about leaving a job to the company. I told them honestly, but that was the last time that I was honest. After that I told sort of white lie. I thought, It was better for them to tell the reason of leaving the job such as wanting to go back to study or health problem. Sometimes I am reluctant to tell all about something, because it can make them feel bad.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!


I\'ve done that too!

I could not think of a reason that would not hurt my boss so I told them that I was going to another place.

Thank you for sharing your story. ^^

Here are some corrections.

See you in class! :)



~~t. Ally




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When I want to change my job, I couldn\'t tell the truth.

>> When I want to change my job, I couldn\'t tell the truth.


I remember the first time when I talked about leaving a job to the company.

>> I remember the first time I talked about wanting to leave my job at the company.


I told them honestly, but that was the last time that I was honest. .

>> CORRECT!


After that I told sort of white lie.

>> After that I sort of just told some white lies.


I thought, It was better for them to tell the reason of leaving the job such as wanting to go back to study or health problem.

>> I thought it would be better for them to say that the reason I left the job is because I wanted to go back to studying or that I have a health problem.


 Sometimes I am reluctant to tell all about something, because it can make them feel bad.

>> Sometimes I am reluctant to tell people about some matters because it makes them feel bad.

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