homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day to you [이름]! I hope you\'re having a blast. Thank again for completing your homework. I am truly convinced that you are a good story-teller. You can make ordinary stories interesting. For your homework today, I have only one reminder. It\'s about the use of hyphens. The adjective \"state-of-the-art\" is hyphenated. Hyphens\' main purpose is to glue words together. They notify the reader that two or more elements in a sentence are linked. Although there are rules and customs governing hyphens, there are also situations when writers must decide whether to add them for clarity. Generally, hyphenate two or more words when they come before a noun they modify and act as a single idea. This is called a compound adjective. However, some established compound adjectives are always hyphenated. Always check on the dictionary to be sure.~~T. DEE
Before 8 years ago, My hometown was really rural area. But after it was designated as Special Self-Governing City it is developing with fast speed.
Many National Research Complex and Administrative agency relocated from Seoul city to my hometown.
Many public servants work in here. They often hire employee as a irregular job. I think this situation offers people opportunities of getting a job.
Anyway, here are many restaurants, theater and shopping centers contrary to the past. wherever i go everything is new and state of the art.
About 8 years ago, my hometown was only a typical rural area. But then after it was designated as Special Self-Governing City it is now developing fast-paced.
The National Research Complex and other administrative agencies were relocated from Seoul city to my hometown.
Many public servants now work here. They often hire contractual employees. I think that this is a good opportunity for local people to get a job.
In addition to this, there are now plenty of restaurants, theaters and shopping centers contrary to the past. Wherever I go everything is new and state-of-the-art.
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