homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I become a new grade,I meet new students.So I can become familiar with my friends.Also I can meet new friends through a mobile a APP.But I usually use first one.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kelvin!
You have to practice the correct sentence patterns.
Take note of the corrections.
Practice some more.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I become a new grade,I meet new students.
>> I meet new students in the beginning of each school year.
So I can become familiar with my friends.
>> This is for me to have close friends.
Also I can meet new friends through a mobile a APP.
>> I can also meet new friends through a mobile app.
But I usually use first one.
>> However I usually do it by using the first method.
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