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2018-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Q. What is your favorite way to practice your English? A. When I was in Korea, I didn't have a chance to speak English. I just studied to get a good score on the exam. But since I came to Germany, I have had to speak English in my daily life. When I meet my daughter's teachers or other parents, I have to talk to them in English. I still feel shy when I speak English, but it becames better than before. Sometimes I talk to my daughter in English. She can speak English more fluently than me. So it is helpful to practice my English.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

What is your favorite way to practice your English? Please answer in details.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

When I was in Korea, I didn\'t have a chance to speak English. I just studied to get a good score on the exam. But since I came to Germany, I have had to speak English in my daily life. When I meet my daughter\'s teachers or other parents, I have to talk to them in English. I still feel shy when I speak English, but it becames better than before. Sometimes I talk to my daughter in English. She can speak English more fluently than me. So it is helpful to practice my English.

 

CORRECTIONS:

When I was in Korea, I didn\'t have a chance to speak English. I just studied to get a good score on the exam. But, since I came to Germany, I have had to speak English in my daily life. When I meet my daughter\'s teachers or other parents, I have to talk to them in English. I still feel shy when I speak English, but it became better than before. Sometimes, I talk to my daughter in English. She can speak English more fluently than me. So, it is helpful to practice my English.

 

 

** Dear [이름], it’s good that you have just very few grammar corrections in your homework; however, I have to say that you were not able to answer the question that’s being asked. I did not see you mentioning your favourite/favorite ways on how you practice English. J  Please take note of that and also the few corrections. J Thank you. ^^

 

Speak with you tomorrow. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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