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Basic Capitalization Rules

1. Capitalize the First Word of a Sentence
2. Capitalize Names and Other Proper Nouns
3. Capitalize the First Word of a Quote (Sometimes)
4. Capitalize Days, Months, and Holidays, But Not Seasons
5. Capitalize Most Words in Titles
6. Capitalize Cities, Countries, Nationalities, and Languages

I hope you find this useful. Have a good day!

~~T. Dee

In my opinion , Jeju island is the most popular place in korea.
I lived in jeju for 1 month this winter so I recommend you to visite here and if someone want to know attractive site of jeju , I can give some information about it.
It has many beautiful natural view and the atmosphere is peacefull. But in vacation season , There is really crowded by tourists.
For more information, all side of Jeju is surrounded by emerald coasts.
What\'s more, The mountain, Hanrasan, is famous korea volcanic mountain which makes jeju island more attractive.
Everywhere you go in Jeju, you can see this mountain.
Jeju island takes 1hour from seoul by airplane. In pick season , everything related to jeju becomes very expensive including airplane ticket.

In my opinion, Jeju Island is the most popular place in Korea.
I lived in Jeju for 1 month last winter so I am confident to recommend for you to visit this place.

In case someone wants to know about the attractions in Jeju, I can give some information about it.
It has many beautiful natural views and the atmosphere is peaceful. But  during the peak season for vacation, it is crowded with tourists.
To add to this, I have seen that the entirety of Jeju Island is surrounded by emerald coasts.
Also, the mountain, Hanrasan, a famous volcanic mountain in Korea,  makes the  island more attractive.
Wherever you go in Jeju, this mountain can be seen.

Jeju Island takes 1 hour travel time from Seoul by airplane.

During the peak season, everything becomes very expensive including airplane tickets.