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2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I don't tend to follow celebrity much but I enjoy watching youtube of BTS which is boy band in Korea. I didn't know how famous they are in other country before I met a person who is learning korean to go to korea because of BTS in New Zealand. I am proud of them as they affect a lot in the world about korean culture.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


I think they are quite famous! ^^

They also have a big fan base here in the Philippines.

I have heard some of their songs, and their are quite nice.^^

Thank you for sharing your opinion.

See you in class!



~~t. Ally



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I don\'t tend to follow celebrity much but I enjoy watching youtube of BTS which is boy band in Korea.

>> I don\'t tend to follow celebrity much but I enjoy watching youtube videos of BTS; a boy band from Korea.


I didn\'t know how famous they are in other country before I met a person who is learning korean to go to korea because of BTS in New Zealand.

>> I don\'t know how famous they are in other countries before until I met a person from New Zealand who wanted to learn Korean so she can go to Korea and see BTS.


I am proud of them as they affect a lot in the world about korean culture.

>> I am proud of them as they give great influence of the Korean culture around the world.

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