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Hi [이름]!
I think they are quite famous! ^^
They also have a big fan base here in the Philippines.
I have heard some of their songs, and their are quite nice.^^
Thank you for sharing your opinion.
See you in class!
~~t. Ally
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I don\'t tend to follow celebrity much but I enjoy watching youtube of BTS which is boy band in Korea.
>> I don\'t tend to follow celebrity much but I enjoy watching youtube videos of BTS; a boy band from Korea.
I didn\'t know how famous they are in other country before I met a person who is learning korean to go to korea because of BTS in New Zealand.
>> I don\'t know how famous they are in other countries before until I met a person from New Zealand who wanted to learn Korean so she can go to Korea and see BTS.
I am proud of them as they affect a lot in the world about korean culture.
>> I am proud of them as they give great influence of the Korean culture around the world.
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