homework.
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Can you talk about three things you like about yourself? Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
Frist of all, I like that I am trustworthy. I try to keep my promise and tell the truth. Secondly, I like that I am good at housework. I like cooking and cleaning the house. My daughter is still young so she always messes up the house. But I try to keep my house spick and span. Last, I like my height. I\'m 165cm, it is just the middle tall. It is not too tall and too small in Korea. But it feels small in Germany.
CORRECTIONS:
First of all, I like that I am trustworthy. I try to keep my promise and tell the truth. Secondly, I like that I am good at housework. I like cooking and cleaning the house. My daughter is still young so she always messes up the house. But, I try to keep my house spick and span. Lastly, I like my height. I\'m 165cm, it is just the middle tall. It is not too tall and too short in Korea. But, it feels small in Germany.
** Dear [이름], the thought and coherence of your answer is amazing. I like it and it’s very good. J Take note of the few corrections, though.
Thank you and speak with you tomorrow. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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