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2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Q. Can you talk about three things you like about yourself? A. Frist of all, I like that I am trustworthy. I try to keep my promise and tell the truth. Secondly, I like that I am good at housework. I like cooking and cleaning the house. My daughter is still young so she always messes up the house. But I try to keep my house spick and span. Last, I like my height. I'm 165cm, it is just the middle tall. It is not too tall and too small in Korea. But it feels small in Germany.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Can you talk about three things you like about yourself? Please answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

Frist of all, I like that I am trustworthy. I try to keep my promise and tell the truth. Secondly, I like that I am good at housework. I like cooking and cleaning the house. My daughter is still young so she always messes up the house. But I try to keep my house spick and span. Last, I like my height. I\'m 165cm, it is just the middle tall. It is not too tall and too small in Korea. But it feels small in Germany.

 

CORRECTIONS:

First of all, I like that I am trustworthy. I try to keep my promise and tell the truth. Secondly, I like that I am good at housework. I like cooking and cleaning the house. My daughter is still young so she always messes up the house. But, I try to keep my house spick and span. Lastly, I like my height. I\'m 165cm, it is just the middle tall. It is not too tall and too short in Korea. But, it feels small in Germany.


 ** Dear [이름], the thought and coherence of your answer is amazing. I like it and it’s very good. J Take note of the few corrections, though.


Thank you and speak with you tomorrow. J

 

 

    ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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