homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
It's raning in korea. Korean like to eat fried foods in rainny day such as KinmChi flat cake, Potato pan cake and pumpkin pan cake.
Do you konw why?
Because Korean think that the sound of frying food is similar to the sound of raindrops. therfore, when we hear the sound of raining, we think about fried foods in naturally. well,I am going to cook Kimchi fried pan cakes for dinner with rice wine (we call Macgully) KKK
ESSAY: There are many types of music in the world today. One of them is K-pop music, which originated from your country. Why do you think we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society?
I don't like silient atmosphere. that's why I turn on Music although I don't intend to listen.
I love music whether it is traditional or trandy. moreover it is not important where the music come from. Music is abolute necessity in my life.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]. ^_^ Wow! I was amazed by the fact the Koreans like fried foods on a rainy day because it\'s sound is similar to rain drops. Thank you for telling me. ^_^
~ T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It\'s raining in Korea.
>>> Correct.
Korean like to eat fried foods in rainny day such as KinmChi flat cake, Potato pan cake and pumpkin pan cake.
>>> Koreans like to eat fried foods on rainy days such as Kimchi flat cakes, Potato pan cakes and pumpkin pan cakes.
Do you know why?
>>> Correct.
Because Korean think that the sound of frying food is similar to the sound of raindrops.
>>> Because Koreans think that the sound of frying food is similar to the sound of raindrops.
therfore, when we hear the sound of raining, we think about fried foods in naturally.
>>> Therefore, when we hear the sound of raindrops, we naturally think about fried foods.
Well, I am going to cook Kimchi fried pan cakes for dinner with rice wine (we call Macgully) KKK
>>> Well, I am going to cook Kimchi fried pan cakes for dinner with rice wine (We call it Macgully.). KKK
ESSAY: There are many types of music in the world today. One of them is K-pop music, which originated from your country. Why do you think we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society?
I don\'t like silient atmosphere.
>>> I don\'t like a quiet atmosphere.
that\'s why I turn on Music although I don\'t intend to listen.
>>> That\'s why I turn on my music player although I really don\'t listen.
I love music whether it is traditional or trendy.
>>> Correct.
moreover it is not important where the music come from.
>>> Moreover, it is not important where the music comes from.
Music is abolute necessity in my life.
>>> Music is absolutely a necessity in my life.
~ T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It\'s raining in Korea.
>>> Correct.
Korean like to eat fried foods in rainny day such as KinmChi flat cake, Potato pan cake and pumpkin pan cake.
>>> Koreans like to eat fried foods on rainy days such as Kimchi flat cakes, Potato pan cakes and pumpkin pan cakes.
Do you know why?
>>> Correct.
Because Korean think that the sound of frying food is similar to the sound of raindrops.
>>> Because Koreans think that the sound of frying food is similar to the sound of raindrops.
therfore, when we hear the sound of raining, we think about fried foods in naturally.
>>> Therefore, when we hear the sound of raindrops, we naturally think about fried foods.
Well, I am going to cook Kimchi fried pan cakes for dinner with rice wine (we call Macgully) KKK
>>> Well, I am going to cook Kimchi fried pan cakes for dinner with rice wine (We call it Macgully.). KKK
ESSAY: There are many types of music in the world today. One of them is K-pop music, which originated from your country. Why do you think we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society?
I don\'t like silient atmosphere.
>>> I don\'t like a quiet atmosphere.
that\'s why I turn on Music although I don\'t intend to listen.
>>> That\'s why I turn on my music player although I really don\'t listen.
I love music whether it is traditional or trendy.
>>> Correct.
moreover it is not important where the music come from.
>>> Moreover, it is not important where the music comes from.
Music is abolute necessity in my life.
>>> Music is absolutely a necessity in my life.
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