homework
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강사 첨삭
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Do you enjoy taking photographs? Why? What things do you like to photograph?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I don\'t enjoy taking photoraphs. But, after my daughter was born, I try to take good pictures of her. Because I want to remember all of her growing. So, I often take pictures of her daily life by my smartphone. But I am not good at taking pictures. When she had a special anniversary, we went to a photo studio and took a picture by photographer. She took the picture at the studio on the 100th days, one year, two years of her birth. If I have a chance, I want to learn how to take a good picture.
CORRECTIONS:
I don\'t enjoy taking photographs. But, after my daughter was born, I try to take good pictures of her. Because I want to remember all of her growing. So, I often take pictures of her daily life by my smartphone. But, I am not good at taking pictures. When she had a special anniversary, we went to a photo studio and took a picture by a photographer. She took the picture at the studio on the 100th days, after one year of her birth. If I have a chance, I want to learn how to take a good picture.
** Dear [이름], once again, just few corrections, nice one! J Please take note of them.
Thank you and speak with you on Monday. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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