HOMEWORK

Hi [이름]! I enjoyed reading your work again. I can sense the sincerity in your composition like always.

In this work, I have noticed that you tried to use proper capitalization as best as you can. However, you missed to capitalize the pronoun \"I\" on the 3rd sentence and the proper noun \"English\" on the 4th sentence. Don\'t worry because your skill is a work in progress. I know that you will be more familiar with the rules very soon. Congratulations on your progress! Have a good day :) ~~T. Dee

These days , I want to back to my childhood because I\'m regreting not studying hard at university.

These days, I want to be back in time when I was [이름]er because I\'m regreting not studying hard in the university.
While I prepare for getting a job , I\'m realizing what is the most important thing to enter a company.

While I was preparing to get a job, I\'m realizing that it is the most important thing to be employed in a company.
If i go back to middle school,I will take Qualification for High School Graduation instead of going to highschool.

If I could go back to middle school, I will take the qualification exam to skip high school instead of going to high school.
After then , I will go abroad for english studty and once I turn 19 years old , I will go for working holiday.

After that, I will go abroad to study English and once I turn 19 years old, I will have a working holiday.
If it\'s not possible to go back to teenager, I will do double major in Business Administration and attend many programs university provide.

If it\'s not possible to go back to my teenager years, I will have a double major in Business Administration and avail as many programs that my university can provide.