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2018-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Are you good at comforting friends? How do you try to cheer them up? These day, in Korea it is a season to apply to company before graduating college. So, friends of mine have applied to a lot of companies and took pass test referred to as 'aptitude test'. They passed on application mostly, but have failed on aptitude test continuously. Although they didn't show disappointment to me, I could feel like they had a sense of loss. So, I try to meet them when they call me for hanging out with me and I try to buy a meal using my money. If I fail the test, I would be frustrated considerably, but my friends aren't affected by these affairs because they have a optimistic personality. Also, while not worried about that, they have prepared intern for worst case that they fail all pass tests on companies.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. Job application is indeed a problem for most people at this age. It\'s good to have a friend you understands how you feel and is willing to console you when you are down.

- T. Beth

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These day, in Korea it is a season to apply to company before graduating college.

>>>>   These days, it is usual in Korea to apply to a company before graduating college.

So, friends of mine have applied to a lot of companies and took pass test referred to as \'aptitude test\'.

>>>> So, friends of mine have applied to a lot of companies and took part in a test referred to as \'aptitude test\'.

They passed on application mostly, but have failed on aptitude test continuously.

>>>>  They passed mostly passed the application, but have failed on the aptitude test continuously.  

Although they didn\'t show disappointment to me, I could feel like they had a sense of loss.

>>>> CORRECT. 

So, I try to meet them when they call me for hanging out with me and I try to buy a meal using my money.

>>>> So, I try to meet them when they call me to hang out and I try to treat them a meal.  

If I fail the test, I would be frustrated considerably, but my friends aren\'t affected by these affairs because they have a optimistic personality.

>>>>  OR:  If I fail the test, I would be frustrated. However, my friends aren\'t affected by these affairs because they have an optimistic personality.

Also, while not worried about that, they have prepared intern for worst case that they fail all pass tests on companies.

>>>>  Also, while not worried about that, they have prepared for internship if in case they fail to pass all tests in companies.

 

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