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학생이 쓴 원문
Well, we can see many new things while travelling.
So it makes me to experience many things.
Experiencing a lot of things is important.
All the experiences will be help to me in someday.
And I can't think what to write here.
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
It\'s the weekend.
Thank you for all your compositions.
You have stated your thoughts very clearly on this composition.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, we can see many new things while travelling.
>> Correct
So it makes me to experience many things.
>> It gives me a lot of experiences.
Experiencing a lot of things is important.
>> Correct
All the experiences will be help to me in someday.
>> All of these experiences will help me someday.
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