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학생이 쓴 원문
No. I think that when I was young, I think my birthday is important. But now I think that my birthday is same as another peoples birthday. So now I think that birthday isn't that important to me.
강사 첨삭
No. I think that when I was young, I think my birthday is important. But now I think that my birthday is same as another peoples birthday. So now I think that birthday isn\'t that important to me.
No, my birthday now isn\'t important as it was when I was young, I think my birthday is the same as other people\'s day and now my birthday isn\'t important to me.
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