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2018-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What do you do when you get bored? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. I usually play a game when I was board at study and otherthings. If I also board at game because play game long time, I eat a delicious food.And it will solve the boarding.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing ways on how to manage boredom.

Please go over my corrections.

~T. Kelly^^

What do you do when you get bored? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I usually play a game when I was board at study and otherthings.

>> I usually play a game when I am bored and tired studying and doing other things.
If I also board at game because play game long time, I eat a delicious food.

>> I feel bored when I play a game for a long time, so I eat a delicious food.

And it will solve the boarding.

>> That\'s how I manage boredom.

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