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2018-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

If you could talk to your younger self, what would you say? When I look back to younger age, I used to consider much and timid to do something new so that it took many times to try new experiences. I would like to say not to be worried about failure. Despite of losing something, some worthiness must come later.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Self- worth is very important.

I am glad to see you flourishing now. ^^

I hope you will always find happiness and purpose in everything you do.

~~t. Ally

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When I look back to younger age, I used to consider much and timid to do something new so that it took many times to try new experiences.

>> When I look back to my younger age, I used to consider everyone else quite too much and I am always timid to do something new so that it took me too many times to try new experiences.

I would like to say not to be worried about failure. Despite of losing something, some worthiness must come later.

>> I would like to tell myself not to be worried about failure. And that despite of losing something, some worthiness must be realized later.

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