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2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I was finished my army life at 14 october. This thing is the best happend recently. Because korean man must attended the army for 21month ~ 24month. Usually man think a army life is not bad, also the man want to finish early there army life.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong! Thanks for sharing this. In the Philippines, everyone can join the military.

Even women can join, and it is not mandatory. I hope that you somehow enjoyed your stay there

and you also have learned a lot from the military. ^^

~~May~~

 was finished my army life at 14 october.

>> I finished my military service on October 14.
This thing is the best happend recently.

Because korean man must attended the army for 21month ~ 24month.

>> I consider this as the best thing that happened to me recently, because it is mandatory for

every Korean man to undergo this service for 21 months.
Usually man think a army life is not bad, also the man want to finish early there army life.

>> Men think that being in an army is not bad, and they want to finish this early on their life.

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