Homework

Hi Seong Won!

Maybe you can start practicing the correct use of conjunctions.

They have to connect your sentences correctly.

Always remember that there must be smoothness in the transition of your ideas.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t want to live in a place where is aways snowing.
>> I don\'t want to live in a place where it\'s always snowing.
Even I like snow, It will be good to just injoying it in only winter.
>> Even if I like snow, I can only enjoy it in winter.
Furthermore, winter isn\'t my favorite season.
>> Correct
If it always snow, it has to be winter.
>> It\'s always snowing in winter.
I really hate slipping because of snow and ice.

>> Correct