homework

Q. If you are a film director, what kind of movie would you like to make? A. If I am a film difector, I want to make a warm and touching human story movie. I like the story of ordinary people. In this story, they can overcome their hardships and achieve succeed. So I hope everyone who watches this movie have dreams and hopes of life.

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HOMEWORK:

If you are a film director, what kind of movie would you like to make?

Please answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

If I am a film difector, I want to make a warm and touching human story movie. I like the story of ordinary people. In this story, they can overcome their hardships and achieve succeed. So I hope everyone who watches this movie have dreams and hopes of life.

 

CORRECTIONS:

If I am a film director, I want to make a warm and touching human story movie. I like the story of ordinary people. In this story, they can overcome their hardships and achieve success. So, I hope everyone who watches this movie have dreams and hopes of life. 

 

** Dear [이름], nice thought! J You also just have few corrections. Well done! J Please take note of them.

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