homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
I made mistakes yesterday.
I pushed sending key while I writing composition by mistake.
then I came back to the composition board and wrote. when I finished composition, It didn't be sented and moreover it disappeared.
Do you know why?
You checked already my homework while I was writing.T.T
When I do my homework, it takes 20~30 minutes usually.
I was dazed at first and then, I was very desperate.
I am very alright now! It's just past.KKK
ESSAY: What is on your bucket list? How important is attaining what's on your list? Why did you make a bucket list?
I don't make my own bucket list yet.
But from time to time, I write on my diary what I want to do in the future or before I die.
For example,
Going to Los Cabos in Mexico for relaxing and spending money.
Buliting my own house and buldings for the rest of my life.
Cruise trip to aroud the world for an year.
Well. I have to make a lot of money for my bucket list.
I feel desperate again. T.T
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I was wondering the same thing yesterday [이름]. I guessed that something wrong happened to your composition. I just can\'t place my finger on what went wrong. ^_^ I didn\'t know it was possible for me to open your composition while you were still on it. -_-
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
I made mistakes yesterday.
>>> Correct.
>>> I made some mistakes yesterday.
I pushed sending key while I writing composition by mistake.
>>> I clicked on the send button by mistake while I was writing the composition.
then I came back to the composition board and wrote.
>>> Then I tried to re-write my composition again.
when I finished composition, It didn\'t be sented and moreover it disappeared.
>>> However, after I was done with it, it disappeared and was not actually sent.
Do you know why?
>>> Correct.
You checked already my homework while I was writing.T.T
>>> You were checking my homework while I was still writing.T.T
When I do my homework, it takes 20~30 minutes usually.
>>> It usually takes 20~30 minutes for me to finish my homework.
I was dazed at first and then, I was very desperate.
>>> Correct.
>>> I was confused at first and then I got very desperate.
I am very alright now! It\'s just past.KKK
>>> I am okay now! It\'s all in the past.KKK
ESSAY: What is on your bucket list? How important is attaining what\'s on your list? Why did you make a bucket list?
I don\'t make my own bucket list yet.
>>> I haven\'t made my bucket list yet.
But from time to time, I write on my diary what I want to do in the future or before I die.
>>> Correct.
For example, going to Los Cabos in Mexico for relaxing and spending money.
>>> Correct.
>>> For example, going to Los Cabos, Mexico to relax and spend some money.
Buliting my own house and buldings for the rest of my life.
>>> Another is to build my house and perhaps some business buildings.
Cruise trip to aroud the world for an year.
>>> A cruise trip around the world in a year would also be great.
Well. I have to make a lot of money for my bucket list.
>>> Well, I guess I need a lot of money to fulfill all these things in my bucket list.
I feel desperate again. T.T
>>> Correct.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
I made mistakes yesterday.
>>> Correct.
>>> I made some mistakes yesterday.
I pushed sending key while I writing composition by mistake.
>>> I clicked on the send button by mistake while I was writing the composition.
then I came back to the composition board and wrote.
>>> Then I tried to re-write my composition again.
when I finished composition, It didn\'t be sented and moreover it disappeared.
>>> However, after I was done with it, it disappeared and was not actually sent.
Do you know why?
>>> Correct.
You checked already my homework while I was writing.T.T
>>> You were checking my homework while I was still writing.T.T
When I do my homework, it takes 20~30 minutes usually.
>>> It usually takes 20~30 minutes for me to finish my homework.
I was dazed at first and then, I was very desperate.
>>> Correct.
>>> I was confused at first and then I got very desperate.
I am very alright now! It\'s just past.KKK
>>> I am okay now! It\'s all in the past.KKK
ESSAY: What is on your bucket list? How important is attaining what\'s on your list? Why did you make a bucket list?
I don\'t make my own bucket list yet.
>>> I haven\'t made my bucket list yet.
But from time to time, I write on my diary what I want to do in the future or before I die.
>>> Correct.
For example, going to Los Cabos in Mexico for relaxing and spending money.
>>> Correct.
>>> For example, going to Los Cabos, Mexico to relax and spend some money.
Buliting my own house and buldings for the rest of my life.
>>> Another is to build my house and perhaps some business buildings.
Cruise trip to aroud the world for an year.
>>> A cruise trip around the world in a year would also be great.
Well. I have to make a lot of money for my bucket list.
>>> Well, I guess I need a lot of money to fulfill all these things in my bucket list.
I feel desperate again. T.T
>>> Correct.
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