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I think It's more important increasing people's standard of living.
If we do just protecting the environment, It's a temporary method.
The environment will be polluted anytime again.
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I think It\'s more important increasing people\'s standard of living.
>> Correct
Or >> I think it is more important to increase people\'s standard of living.
If we do just protecting the environment, It\'s a temporary method.
The environment will be polluted anytime again.
>> We don\'t always protect our environment because people will still be polluting it anytime.
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