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2018-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

It's almost WINTER in Korea. Talk about a good memory you had in WINTER. I alway say snow when I think about the winter. I only remember about snow in winter season because I like snowing and this scene is wonderful. I like ridinhg a snowflat or snowfighting with friends. So, I hope snowing a lot in this year.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Tell me more about your winter memories in class. I am excited to hear your stories in class.

~T. Kelly^^

It\'s almost WINTER in Korea. Talk about a good memory you had in WINTER.
I alway say snow when I think about the winter.

>> I always answer \"snow\" when I think about winter.
I only remember about snow in winter season because I like snowing and this scene is wonderful.

>> I only remember about snow in winter season because I like it when it snows because the scene is wonderful.
I like ridinhg a snowflat or snowfighting with friends.

>> I like riding a sled or snow fighting with my friends.
So, I hope snowing a lot in this year.

>> So, I hope it will snow much this year.

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