Homework

Hi Sophie! You really work hard in your English class. I am happy! ^^

You try to be a good student here. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework.

Please check the grammar corrections below.

I think you are very happy remembering your times when you were in Canada.

You had good friends, just because you are a very good friend.

See you later! ^^

~~May~~

I went to Canada in July.

>> Correct!

I spent a lot of happy time.

>> I spent a lot of happy times.

Then i was met some friends.

>> Then I met some friends.

We went to go to in Toronto island by ferry and saw concert, watched movie in a park.

>> We went to an island in Toronto by ferry. We watched a concert and a movie at a park.

We saw firework in Niagara falls and i saw skunk first time in my life.

>> We watched a firework display in Niagara Falls and I saw a skunk for the first time in my life.

We givened a lots of conversation.

>> We talked a lot.

Even though 4month ago story,but that time is my best time(also happened) in my life!.

>> Even it took only 4 months, but that was my best time and the best thing that happened in my life!