homework
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HOMEWORK:
When you write an essay, you learn to express yourself in a more logical way and also you develop your writing skills, your vocabulary and your own writing style. All these activities require outstanding writing skills, which can be developed only by writing essays, and practicing. :)
Writing Task:
What is your favorite sport? Why do you like it? Explain your answer in not more than five (5) sentences. :my favorite sports are soccer,basketball,swim,run,jump rope
강사 첨삭
Hi, Elsa! ^_^
Thank you for answering our essay question for today.
You are a very athletic person! ^_^ I envy you!
I wish I have your energy. kkk.
Why do you like these sports?
I hope you have a wonderful day.
See you again on Friday! :*
~Teacher Charry
my favorite sports are soccer,basketball,swim,run,jump rope
>> My favorite sports are soccer, basketball, swimming, running, and rope jumping.
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