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Hi Sir [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework. I had a good time reading your work. I can sense in your writing that you have great stories to tell and I wish to hear more of it. Anyway, I  like to remind you that the use of con[이름]ctions is to connect ideas in the same sentence. It is not recommended to use \"so\" at the beginning of your sentence when the idea you are referring to is in the previous sentence. Join the two sentences instead to complete the thought. The use of \"so\" as you hear them in spoken English is to make a transition of or support the previously delivered sentence. The use of \"so\" at the beginning of a sentence in spoken English (e.g \"So, how was your day?\") evokes an atmosphere of being casual. In formal grammar however this is not accepted. I hope this tip helps you.

~~T. Dee :)

When I worked in Algeria in the north of Africa nearby Europe, Ihave got much interest in the history of Europe.
I think we should know the history of Roman Empire to know the history of Europe.
So I would like to visit to Rome of Italy and france, England, Germany near to Italy.
It needs more than one month to visit all these places.
But I really want to go there with my family for my son\'s education.
And one more thing to say, if it is possible, I want to visit to Khao Lak in Thailand one more time where I have been honeymoon.

When I worked in Algeria, a country located at the north of Africa, close to Europe, I became interested about European history.
I think we should know the history of Roman Empire first to understand the history of Europe.
This is why I would like to visit Rome of Italy and also the countries nearby like France, England and Germany.
It will take more than one month to visit all these places but I really want to go there with my family and also for my son\'s education.
One more thing, if possible, I want to visit to Khao Lak in Thailand once again because it where my wife and I had spent our honeymoon.