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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. I agree that first impression is very important. This will determine how people see you or perceive you on your first meeting and following meeting after that. That is why we always want to make a good first impression.
- T. Beth
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I have a tendency that first impression was kept for a long time and not changed for me.
>>>> I have a tendency to have a long lasting first impression on someone.
In my experience, I met a man who doesn\'t smile but frown frequently at first time.
>>>> In my experience, I met a man who didn\'t smile and always frowned the first time we met.
After spending time with him, although I knew that he is not a bad man, I was reluctant for him because of first impression bad.
>>>> After spending time with him, although I knew that he was not a bad man, I was reluctant towards him because of a bad first impression.
Therefore, when meeting older people than me for the first time, I always stoop down and greet them in order to convey feeling that I\'m a polite person.
>>>> Therefore, when meeting older people for the first time, I always stoop down and greet them in order to convey a feeling that I\'m a polite person.
In every event, first impression is most important between people and isn\'t changed for other people conveniently.
>>>> In every event, first impression is the most important between people and it doesn\'t change for some.
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