homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
It is very quiet here because of English listening Test in SAT.
I hope every students get a good results in SAT. I know they have had a hard time for this test. God bless them!
Oh! I have to postpone tomorrow's class. I am going to go on a trip to the hot spring place tomorrow with my husband.
I really like bathing in hot spring.
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!
ESSAY : What’s the worst movie you’ve recently seen? Why is it the worst movie for you? Explain.
It is very hard to say What is the worst movie I have seen.
Because I really like movie, evenmore I don't care about types of movie.
I watch 2 or 3 movies a week downloading through the internet.of course I pay and download.
I am sure that every movie is the result of efforts from film makers such as director, actor, actress and other staffs.
therefore I think that there is no worst movie, there is only likes and dislikes of audience.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Nice plan! Enjoy your trip! I also want to go swim in the nearby hot spring. Hmmm. Maybe I will try to convince my son to drive me there. ^_^
~ T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It is very quiet here because of English listening Test in SAT.
>>> Correct.
I hope every students get a good results in SAT.
>>> I hope every student gets a good score in the SAT.
I know they have had a hard time for this test. God bless them!
>>> I know they are having a hard time in this test. God bless them!
Oh! I have to postpone tomorrow\'s class.
>>> Correct.
I am going to go on a trip to the hot spring place tomorrow with my husband.
>>> I am going on a trip to the hot spring place tomorrow with my husband.
I really like bathing in hot spring.
>>> I really like bathing in the hot springs.
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY : What’s the worst movie you’ve recently seen? Why is it the worst movie for you? Explain.
It is very hard to say What is the worst movie I have seen.
>>> It is very hard to remember the worst movie I have seen so far.
Because I really like movie, evenmore I don\'t care about types of movie.
>>> Because I really like watching movies and even more I don\'t care about the type of movies I watch.
I watch 2 or 3 movies a week downloading through the internet.
>>> I watch 2 or 3 movies a week by downloading them through the internet.
of course I pay and download.
>>> Of course I pay before I download.
I am sure that every movie is the result of efforts from film makers such as director, actor, actress and other staffs.
>>> I am sure that every movie is the result of combined efforts from film makers such as the director, actors, actresses and the other staff.
therefore I think that there is no worst movie, there is only likes and dislikes of audience.
>>> Therefore, I think that there is no bad movie. There are only likes and dislikes from the audiences.
~ T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It is very quiet here because of English listening Test in SAT.
>>> Correct.
I hope every students get a good results in SAT.
>>> I hope every student gets a good score in the SAT.
I know they have had a hard time for this test. God bless them!
>>> I know they are having a hard time in this test. God bless them!
Oh! I have to postpone tomorrow\'s class.
>>> Correct.
I am going to go on a trip to the hot spring place tomorrow with my husband.
>>> I am going on a trip to the hot spring place tomorrow with my husband.
I really like bathing in hot spring.
>>> I really like bathing in the hot springs.
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY : What’s the worst movie you’ve recently seen? Why is it the worst movie for you? Explain.
It is very hard to say What is the worst movie I have seen.
>>> It is very hard to remember the worst movie I have seen so far.
Because I really like movie, evenmore I don\'t care about types of movie.
>>> Because I really like watching movies and even more I don\'t care about the type of movies I watch.
I watch 2 or 3 movies a week downloading through the internet.
>>> I watch 2 or 3 movies a week by downloading them through the internet.
of course I pay and download.
>>> Of course I pay before I download.
I am sure that every movie is the result of efforts from film makers such as director, actor, actress and other staffs.
>>> I am sure that every movie is the result of combined efforts from film makers such as the director, actors, actresses and the other staff.
therefore I think that there is no worst movie, there is only likes and dislikes of audience.
>>> Therefore, I think that there is no bad movie. There are only likes and dislikes from the audiences.
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