homework
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How much do you "trust" the weather forecast? How often is it wrong? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
Most Korean people don't believe the weather forecast.
There are lots of problem.
Especially, the typhoon in this summer was all wrong.
So, the people don't belive it.
But I still belive it because all of this weather forcast was not wrong.
It was only mistakes of weather forecast, butit will be a grat job soon.
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How much do you \"trust\" the weather forecast? How often is it wrong? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. Most Korean people don\'t believe the weather forecast.
>> Correct.
There are lots of problem.
There are lots of problem.
>> There are lots of problems.
Especially, the typhoon in this summer was all wrong.
Especially, the typhoon in this summer was all wrong.
>> Especially in summer, they announced inaccurate forecast about typhoons.
So, the people don\'t belive it.
So, the people don\'t belive it.
>> So, the people don\'t believe it.
But I still belive it because all of this weather forcast was not wrong.
But I still belive it because all of this weather forcast was not wrong.
>> But I still believe them because their weather forecast was accurate.
It was only mistakes of weather forecast, butit will be a grat job soon.
It was only mistakes of weather forecast, butit will be a grat job soon.
>> There were inaccuracies but they will improve soon.
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