homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong! Good morning! Are you happy today?
I hope that you always find happiness.
Money is happiness but not all the time.
Some people are not happy even if they have a lot of money.
See you later! ^^
~~May~~
MY happiness is minor pleasure.
>> I feel happy even in small things.
In my normal life, I play the soccer, watch the movie , eat a meat , go to sleep , work and buy clothes,this everything is comeback to me as happiness.
>> In my normal life, I play soccer, watch movie , eat meat , go to sleep , work and buy clothes. These are my happiness.
For that , I think to need money to do this everything.
>> Because of that, I need money for my happiness.
Maybe many money life is not happy, but littel money life is unhappy.
>> There might have unhappiness in life if you have a lot of money.
So I need to money for my happiness.
>> But for me money is happiness.
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