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There are a traditional cloth called \"Han Bok”in Korea.

>>There is a traditional attire called \"Han Bok”in Korea.
Han bok has very beautiful lines and colors.

>>Han Bok has very beautiful designs and colors.
Compared with the traditional clothes of China and Japan, the style of the traditional clothes of Chinese and Japanese are slim-fit, but Han bok has a plenty style.

>>Compared with the traditional clothes of China and Japan, which are slim-fit, Han bok has plenty of style.
In the past, many people wore Han bok in traditional holiday, but not now. 

>>In the past, many people wore Han bok during traditional holidays, but presently, not anymore.  
I guess that it is uncomfortable to move.

>>I guess because it is uncomfortable and restricts movements.
Han bok is very expensive but recently there are many kinds of Han bok that improved easy to move and their price are cheap.

>>Han bok is very costly but recently there were designs with alterations made to let some movement, which are priced cheaper.
I bought a Han bok for my wedding ceremony 15 years ago.

>>I bought a Han bok for my wedding ceremony 15 years ago.
This cloth is often not worn and is kept well in the closet.

>>This type of attire is often not worn but is kept well in the closet.