homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
When you write an essay, you learn to express yourself in a more logical way and also you develop your writing skills, your vocabulary and your own writing style. All these activities require outstanding writing skills, which can be developed only by writing essays, and practicing. :)
Writing Task:
Do you think school is a fun place for learning? Why? Explain your answer in not more than five (5) sentences. :yes!! beacause there are many friend in my scool~!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Elsa! ^_^
Thank you very much for writing today.
I agree that the school is a fun place to learn.
So, keep on studying and meeting new friends! :)
See you again on Monday.
Have a wonderful weekend. :*
~Teacher Charry ^^v
yes!!
>> Yes, the school is a fun place for learning.
beacause there are many friend in my scool~!
>> It\'s because I have many friends in my school!
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